In Atlantic waters I feared I would drown
Whereas Dead sea salt never let me down
Caribbean I admired from its snow white shores
Pacific I have yet to taste, know not less or more
If I am the salt why then add more?
Dversepoets.com Monday quadrille. Word is salt.
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About Mary (tqhousecat)
I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
wow, Mary, that ending really packs a punch – well done!
❤
David
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Thank you David!
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That led up beautifully to that last line…so well done..
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Thank you Ain!
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Everyone fears ocean because of the might deep and far rage view, I really scary,
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Thank you for telling me I am not alone.
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I like the idea of tasting the different flavours of ocean! I have tried out the Med, the North Sea, the Atlantic, Pacific and Libyan…I would love to sample the Carribean next…
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That is more than I sampled! Thank you Ingrid!
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I came Mary, I read, great work my friend — but I am not well. Be back soon.
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It means much that someone come when they are not well. I will pray for you and see you soon. 💕
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I like that last line about being salt.
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Beautiful
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Very nicely done!
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Thanks Dwight!
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Lovely! ❤
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Thank you!
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Salt is mostly the same… we will always carry it with us.
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Yes, and water too. Thanks Bjorn
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You got us to dip our toes in and then you went deep!
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Funny how that happens because I am afraid of deep water.
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😀
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This progressed to a wonderful finish, Mary!
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