We seal all the spaces
Where critters show their faces
In the black of night
Where lovers dream
We tell our stories
Reiterate our fears and glories
In hope they carry us
Through days to come
The stranger spies and declares
“How wise you are” to prepare
For future storms
Now unknown
We settle for a moment’s pause
Choose to smile in thanks and nod
Why bother to explain
In the middle one works both ends
Dversepoets.com Adages and Proverbs. Lillian challenges us to write a poem using an adage from a list provided below without actually penning the line but making it obvious to the reader. At the end, cite the line. Quite a challenge Lillian. I hope I did it justice.
- “Many hands make light work.” Adagia
- “An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.” Poor Richard’s Almanack
- “Fish and visitors stink after three days.” Poor Richard’s Almanack
- “To err is human, to repent divine, to persist devilish.” Poor Richard’s Almanack
- “Things are not always what they seem.” Bee-Keeper and the Bees” from Aesop’s Fables
- “The truth shall set you free.” John 8:32
- “To everything there is a season.” Ecclesiastes 3:1
- “Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’re going to get.” Forrest Gump, the movie.
The phrase I chose is “An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.” Poor Richard’s Almanack
I especially liked the second stanza where are stories carry us through the days to come.
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It always been a story applicable to all human being
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Yes and humiliation and motivation work together. Thank you!
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Yes, Mary! You did indeed do the prompt justice! Ending is quite perceptive!
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Well done!
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I love the last stanza in particular.
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This is a wonderful pairing of “line” and poem …. Cheers!
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This is gorgeous, gorgeous writing, Mary! Wow! ❤️
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