In Atlantic waters I feared I would drown
Whereas Dead sea salt never let me down
Caribbean I admired from its snow white shores
Pacific I have yet to taste, know not less or more
If I am the salt why then add more?
Dversepoets.com Monday quadrille. Word is salt.
About Mary (tqhousecat)
I am married, and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. My poetry is on my blog and you can find some previous stories on Medium and linked-in. My focus is hope in Christ. My desire is that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired, occasionally amused, kind, and patient to my growth in Christ as He conforms me to His image.
wow, Mary, that ending really packs a punch – well done!
❤
David
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Thank you David!
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That led up beautifully to that last line…so well done..
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Thank you Ain!
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Everyone fears ocean because of the might deep and far rage view, I really scary,
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Thank you for telling me I am not alone.
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I like the idea of tasting the different flavours of ocean! I have tried out the Med, the North Sea, the Atlantic, Pacific and Libyan…I would love to sample the Carribean next…
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That is more than I sampled! Thank you Ingrid!
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I came Mary, I read, great work my friend — but I am not well. Be back soon.
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It means much that someone come when they are not well. I will pray for you and see you soon. 💕
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I like that last line about being salt.
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Beautiful
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Very nicely done!
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Thanks Dwight!
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Lovely! ❤
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Thank you!
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Salt is mostly the same… we will always carry it with us.
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Yes, and water too. Thanks Bjorn
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You got us to dip our toes in and then you went deep!
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Funny how that happens because I am afraid of deep water.
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😀
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This progressed to a wonderful finish, Mary!
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