Love and her Response

A hand holds me firm without pressure or harm

No threads to untangle or threats to disarm

Peace in its presence I sway to its song

Mystery in its melody makes me sing along

 

dVersepoets.com. Prompt is to use assonance and consonance in a poem, and maybe some alliteration. I have no idea if I did this correctly, but I tried.

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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13 Responses to Love and her Response

  1. Gina says:

    peace in its presence and mystery in its melody – those were very touching lines, about things we cannot see yet believe in its power, nicely done to me Mary.

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  2. Beverly Crawford says:

    This has a delightful rhythm.

    Like

  3. msjadeli says:

    There is a definite lyrical quality to this Mary.

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  4. oh the softness and the tenderness made my heart sigh.

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  5. Frank Hubeny says:

    Very nice sound and description of a response to love.

    Like

  6. Such a tender and beautiful love song!

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  7. hank77 says:

    kaykuala
    You strike it well and so softly Mary!

    Hank

    Like

  8. The last line really makes me start humming along

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  9. My favorite part is the line with “threads” and “threats.”

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