A hand holds me firm without pressure or harm
No threads to untangle or threats to disarm
Peace in its presence I sway to its song
Mystery in its melody makes me sing along
dVersepoets.com. Prompt is to use assonance and consonance in a poem, and maybe some alliteration. I have no idea if I did this correctly, but I tried.
About Mary (tqhousecat)
I am married, and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. My poetry is on my blog and you can find some previous stories on Medium and linked-in. My focus is hope in Christ. My desire is that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired, occasionally amused, kind, and patient to my growth in Christ as He conforms me to His image.
mehflowers 
peace in its presence and mystery in its melody – those were very touching lines, about things we cannot see yet believe in its power, nicely done to me Mary.
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Thank you!
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This has a delightful rhythm.
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There is a definite lyrical quality to this Mary.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful Mary!
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oh the softness and the tenderness made my heart sigh.
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Very nice sound and description of a response to love.
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Such a tender and beautiful love song!
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kaykuala
You strike it well and so softly Mary!
Hank
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The last line really makes me start humming along
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My favorite part is the line with “threads” and “threats.”
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