In the Wind

A wildflower
Drops seed where it grows
Swept up in a breeze
Carried in a whirlwind
Petals of pastel
Burst through where
Attempts failed
Crops died
Famine threatened
A fragrance of hope
Whispers its way
To someone’s senses
And thus
A florist is born it is quadrille Monday. The prompt word is wild.

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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19 Responses to In the Wind

  1. lillian says:

    Smiling I am. I also used the idea of wild flowers. Love this idea that they plant themselves wildly, many times at the whim of the winds, and a florist is born. 🙂


  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    I like the thought of a florist being born even when famine threatens.


  3. Sherry Marr says:

    I love wildflowers best of all.


  4. Raivenne says:

    “A fragrance of hope
    Whispers its way
    To someone’s senses
    And thus
    A florist is born”

    Nice! I am minded of spring, the first signs of life after a long winter.


  5. Truedessa says:

    A fragrance of hope, A florist is born. I am thankful for the wildflowers.


  6. sanaarizvi says:

    Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write 💝

    Liked by 1 person

  7. kim881 says:

    I love the title, Mary, and that you’ve captured the whole story of not only a wildflower but also a florist in your 44-word quadrille. The short lines convey the movement of a seed in a whirlwind.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. oooooooh. i love the story telling only in 44 words.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. rivrvlogr says:

    Always keep hope alive!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. msjadeli says:

    I like how your poem grows as the flower that throws seeds grows.


  11. I love to become a florist on what’s carried by the wind.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Nice ending! I also like the way you broke up the lines.

    Liked by 1 person

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