As dusk erases the day
Familiar lines shade into night
Formless
Trouble seems boundless
Reason is senseless
But…
Life within
Effortlessly placed by a colorless, faceless entity
When the world was found clueless
Was born helpless
And died harmless
Now found in me ageless
I rise fearless
Hope is revealed
When all else is powerless
dversepoets.com prompt is “Less is more” I used 7 or 8 words from a list of about 15 into a poem that instills hope, as hope is the first candle lit for advent.
Love this poem of hope.
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I love your first line…As dusk erases the day…lovely.
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Great poem Mary! Hope and confidence! Very nice.
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Good weaving of the prompt words in with a positive message, Mary.
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Capable use of the words from the “less” list, ending (as does Pandora’s box) with hope. Well said.
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Good point in the title. The less we are the more hope we have. A good reason to have less.
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We have to understand our insignificance to truly see the hope I think
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