A virgin defiled is like a palmed rose
Stripped of her fragrance–a sillage remains
Sustaining a grey life with dim accuracy
Until spiritual songs dance their way deep inside her painted mirth
Nulling marrows consuming her inside out
dversepoets.com. The charms of Samuel Greenberg, a romantic poet, unpublished and taken young by tuberculosis. Out of 21 charms below in his poem “The Pale Impromptu” the challenge is to pick 5 and weave a poem. I used 6 of them.
Dim Accuracy; Candle salve; Consumed moon;
Eyes jealousy; Fouls deviation; Grey life;
Hearts brow; Lucid farrows; Nulling marrows;
Painted mirth; Pale heat; Palmed rose;
Pearls from tissue; Pellucid quest; Royal flesh;
Skulls of saints; Slime pigments; Spiritual songs;
Solitudes wish; Times chant; Yellow dreams;
Love how you used Greenberg’s phrases in this piece, they are quite riveting! Very well written. 🙂
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Thank you Lucy! I am really backed up reading. I will catch up soon.
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Very nice work…. I love the transition from sadness to joy in you poem.
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Excellent piece, Mary!
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Your compassion and encouragement shine here, Mary.
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Very well constructed!
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Great opening line Mary – sets the tone for the whole poem. Thank you for joining the prompt and being inspired by Greenberg
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Frome your first lines this poem made me think of Blake’s sick rose… but I hope that she will find light and recovery in the end.
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It’s no doubt a life altering experience. Love how beautifully you have incorporated the charms here, Mary 💝
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