A Simple Melody

“Simple, it’s all so simple.” She smiled as she wiped away translucent tears like cataracts from her eyes. Oh, there was still much to do, in fact, so much that if she thought any further than the next moment, all might crumble again.

She crushed the sun-drenched mint between the palms of her hands, placed them in the tea ball and dipped it into the boiling water. Four minutes was all it needed before the aroma quietly filled her nostrils and softened her face. She sat, eyes closed, and said to no one, “through the deep caves of thought I hear a voice that sings of simple answers weaved through the pillars of time.”

The reward is so worth the process but none can know but the one who hears. Today silence may be her devoted friend but will a smile outrun a memory?

Dversepoets.com Monday prosery. Exactly 144 words of flash or creative fiction incorporating a line of a poem, without changing the order of words.

“Through the deep caves of thought I hear a voice that sings:”
–by Oliver Wendell Holmes Sr., from The Chambered Nautilus
My breaks last a moment at a time.

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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12 Responses to A Simple Melody

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    Luv the progression of quiet reverie into that question


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  2. Nitin Lalit says:

    Beautiful reverie described here. I loved the soft, tender tone of this piece.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. msjadeli says:

    Mary, I like how she purposely took herself to a happy place then consciously empowered her core. I’m sure she will be fine with those resources at her fingertips.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Leyde Ryan says:

    This is the most beautiful phrase I’ve heard in weeks: “simple answers weaved through the pillars of time.”


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