I woke to rain where sun once shone
Things planned in May now lie in wait
Inside I move with clouded gait
Seems long ago my skin was bronze
Why stuck between this then and now
Empty hands in heart my head bowed
I stretched my body head to toe
Seemed effortless no sweaty brow
Soaked I listen; no birdsong vow
No bitter chill nor brittle bone
Can calm the storm or quench the rain
Today’s loss is tomorrow’s gain
Now light bends each to mourn and groan
Tis hope embracing every vine
Wait! One day soon we’ll sip new wine
I woke to rain where sun once shone
Seems long ago my skin was bronze
I stretched my body head to toe
No bitter chill nor brittle bone
Now light bends each to mourn and groan
Dversepoets.com Thursday prompt. Bjorn says this may be out of our comfort zone. What is a comfort zone? (She asks with a smirk 🤔😘)
He explains it better than I,
“Today we are going to try our hand at a poetic form created by Connie Marcum Wong in 2007. I have tried it a few times before, but I have not found it in our dVerse archive.
This is an example of two poems in one with one short poem being expanded in a longer poem. It consists of at least 5 three-line stanzas written in iambic tetrameter (8 syllables and four feet). The first lines of each of the 5 stanzas form an independent poem (hence with at least 5 lines),
In each 3-line-stanza the ending couplets should rhyme and expand on the topic on the first line.
The internal poem given by the first lines should be reinforced by being written in monorhyme (all lines should rhyme with each other)
The rhyme scheme is, therefore: a/b/b a/c/c, and so on.
The poem should end with the internal poem.”
Recently I wrote a Spanish glosa which is similar which made it easier than I thought it would be. That is, if I did it correctly.
I’m glad you ended the main poem on a moment of hope.
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Let’s not end anything with no hope! Tha k you Sarah!
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Gorgeous! I so love the uplifting nature of this poem, Mary 😀
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Thank you Sanaa!
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I also love the 5th stanza with light, hope and more wine please!
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Thank you Grace!
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I like the hope, light, (and wine). 😊
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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This is wonderful and raises the spirit — I truly like it Mary
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I am truly grateful! Thank you Rob!
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Mary, I like how you carried the levels of being through your poem. I love when the light enters here:
“Now light bends each to mourn and groan”
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Thank you Lisa!
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You’re welcome, Mary!
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I love your description of ‘coming alive’ in Spring … each living thing on the planet. Cheers.
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Thanks Helen!
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I love the imagery in this line…”Inside I move with clouded gait”!
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Oh, thank you!
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You are welcome.
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Definitely reassuring to think we will taste the new wine soon…with the King!
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The best wine! Thank you Lynn!
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A glosa is very much the same idea (though you should use your own poem to form the lines here) May sometimes disappoints… but sooner or later it will come
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Love the spirit of this poem, Mary. Ready for the wine!
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