SHHHH!

Can I leave WELL-ENOUGH alone
Discussion done
Not a single
Rhyme or jingle

THEY say more than I can handle
On my sandals
I pound the dirt
I feel no hurt

TIME is but a fleeting minute
Seeds are in it
Soon spring will sprout
No need to shout

Dversepoets.com Minute poetry (-new to me).

  1. narrative poetry.
  2. a 12 line poem made up of 3 quatrains. (3 of 4-line stanzas)
  3. syllabic, 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4 (First line has 8 syllables of each stanza. Remaining lines has 4 syllables in each stanza)
  4. rhymed, rhyme scheme of aabb ccdd eeff.
  5. description of a finished event (preferably something done is 60 seconds).
  6. is best suited to light verse, likely humorous, whimsical or semi-serious.

I think I got it all.. Whatever, it’s a finished event. Sort of light, slightly humorous, semi-serious. I don’t think it reaches whimsical.

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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12 Responses to SHHHH!

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    Luv that time is not vacuous or empty. But rather full of hope and continuity. Nice one.

    Much love …

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  2. Helen Dehner says:

    Shouting with delight … well done!

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  3. rothpoetry says:

    Very well done Mary!

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  4. Grace says:

    Looking forward to that spring. Good one!

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  5. Bodhirose says:

    Spring does make me want to shout, but I won’t…nicely done.

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  6. Ain says:

    The conceot that spring will come (anyway), no need to shout, is a very powerful one..

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  7. sanaarizvi says:

    Such a powerful voice here, Mary! Yes, Spring is just around the corner 💝💝

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  8. msjadeli says:

    wise words, the shadow and light of it:
    “TIME is but a fleeting minute
    Seeds are in it”

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  9. I love that thought… but really here it is still three months away

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  10. Athira says:

    Beautifully done👍🏻

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