““In truth each day is a universe in which we are tangled in the light of stars.”- Horses, Jim Harrison
Vindicated
Oh to hear melodious sound
No bitter aftertaste be found
Inhale breaths pure of toxicity
Oh to behold what few can see within this celestial arena and nebulous sea
Oh that I could touch what ancestors held
But they too did learn like me as well
Stars veer not from a steadfast course
Nor night sky weep in cruel remorse
Each drips light whether great or small
Only One light outshines them all
Oh that all may learn one day to see
With every sense so all may be
Vindicated
Dversepoets.com Tuesday prompt. Choose one from 8 lines from the work of Jim Harrison. Use the line as an epigraph to the poem of my choice.
To make sense of this universe we must use every sense. To me, that just makes sense. But I am just one.
I like this line: “Only One light outshines them all”
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Thank you Frank!
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I love that you point out how the stars hold steady to their course- beautiful!
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See? You wrote that line the way I should have written that line. Thank you!
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Love this especially; “Stars veer not from a steadfast course/Nor night sky weep in cruel remorse,”… such a wonderfully deep write, Mary! 💝💝
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I love where you brought the quote
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I enjoyed your poem the second part, especially. To breathe in fresh air would be wondrous
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A beautiful, classical style, like what you did with the quote, how you found that natural rhyme..
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I love this part:
Each drips light whether great or small
Only One light outshines them all
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Mary, your poem is lovely and full of ageless wisdom …..
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I love you message, Mary, and the lyrical flow of your poem.
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