I
Leaves fall while some remain
Steadfast they wait while changing hues
Compliant with time and purpose
Il
“I won’t get a birthday cake
With candles and décor”
Pouting like a child in two days ninety
III
A text asking questions I cannot answer
Should I stay? Does he care?
I could ask the same, committed three decades
IV
They said her heart stopped and couldn’t save her
Just returned from rehab
Are we ever filled?
V
Strong and resilient my lower middle tooth
Crowded by two on either side it wont budge
Neither will I, I fight for love
Dversepoets.com
The cadralor is a poem of 5, unrelated, numbered stanzaic images, each of which can stand alone as a poem, is fewer than 10 lines, and ideally constrains all stanzas to the same number of lines. Imagery is crucial to cadralore: each stanza should be a whole, imagist poem, almost like a scene from a film, or a photograph. The fifth stanza acts as the crucible, alchemically pulling the unrelated stanzas together into a love poem. By “love poem,” we mean that your fifth stanza illuminates a gleaming thread that runs obliquely through the unrelated stanzas and answers the compelling question: “For what do you yearn?”
Just today’s common observations. Not sure i kept all the rules.
Nice!!! I can see both the separation and the connection.
Much💜love
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Thank you!
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That seems like a diffcult situation to be in. But I love the stubboness:
Neither will I, I fight for love
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Thank you Grace!
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This is wonderful, Mary – I think you nailed the form! Such concise and impactful images in each stanza, united by your fight for love.
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Thanks so much for the encouraging words!
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A perfect interpretation of this (not easy) form! Cheers.
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Thank you Helen. No, not an easy form.
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Sometimes we’re stuck in the middle…and upheld by patience. Good one, Mary!
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This truly exudes patience and inner courage.. I am especially moved by; “A text asking questions I cannot answer/Should I stay?/Does he care?/I could ask the same, committed three decades.”💝💝
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I do love the different images and how the thread of love ran through them all…
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