For the Love of Patience

I

Leaves fall while some remain
Steadfast they wait while changing hues
Compliant with time and purpose

Il
“I won’t get a birthday cake
With candles and décor”
Pouting like a child in two days ninety

III
A text asking questions I cannot answer
Should I stay? Does he care?
I could ask the same, committed three decades


IV
They said her heart stopped and couldn’t save her
Just returned from rehab
Are we ever filled?


V
Strong and resilient my lower middle tooth
Crowded by two on either side it wont budge
Neither will I, I fight for love

Dversepoets.com
The cadralor is a poem of 5, unrelated, numbered stanzaic images, each of which can stand alone as a poem, is fewer than 10 lines, and ideally constrains all stanzas to the same number of lines. Imagery is crucial to cadralore: each stanza should be a whole, imagist poem, almost like a scene from a film, or a photograph. The fifth stanza acts as the crucible, alchemically pulling the unrelated stanzas together into a love poem. By “love poem,” we mean that your fifth stanza illuminates a gleaming thread that runs obliquely through the unrelated stanzas and answers the compelling question: “For what do you yearn?”

Just today’s common observations. Not sure i kept all the rules.

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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11 Responses to For the Love of Patience

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    Nice!!! I can see both the separation and the connection.

    Much💜love

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  2. Grace says:

    That seems like a diffcult situation to be in. But I love the stubboness:

    Neither will I, I fight for love

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  3. Ingrid says:

    This is wonderful, Mary – I think you nailed the form! Such concise and impactful images in each stanza, united by your fight for love.

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  4. Helen Dehner says:

    A perfect interpretation of this (not easy) form! Cheers.

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  5. lynn__ says:

    Sometimes we’re stuck in the middle…and upheld by patience. Good one, Mary!

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  6. sanaarizvi says:

    This truly exudes patience and inner courage.. I am especially moved by; “A text asking questions I cannot answer/Should I stay?/Does he care?/I could ask the same, committed three decades.”💝💝

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  7. I do love the different images and how the thread of love ran through them all…

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