Come, let us count the stars before the donning of dawn!
Hand in hand we unravel our dreams
Only to find infinity has
Neither beginning nor end Thursday and we are exploring first lines to draw the reader into continuing to the end.
I made mine short just in case

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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14 Responses to Laughable

  1. Well, you had me at that first line – and I would have read any length (within reason🙂) but this is a haiku-like gem full of wisdom and clever turns. Terrific.

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  2. rogblog666 says:

    how long till dawn? i want to count the stars!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Beverly Crawford says:

    HA! Aren’t you the clever one! I love it.

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  4. msjadeli says:

    I like the urgency of the first line and then we realize what was the rush 🙂 Nicely done, Mary.


  5. Helen Dehner says:

    Slipping into the beauty of dawn, you will look scrumptious. Great wirte, Mary!!!!

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  6. sanaarizvi says:

    This is brilliantly executed! 💝💝


  7. What an excellent beginning… also tying well into the conclusion.


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