Sun rises and sets
Rain knows only one direction
Clouds conflate and separate
Darkness is silent and still
Until I crush it with shadows
Dversepoets.com
This month is National Tanka Month, or #NaTankaMo. In honor of this celebration of tanka, I would like to focus on three of the 5-line Japanese forms: tanka, kyoka and gogyohka.
The Gogyohka is a relatively new form of five-line poetry. Unlike tanka and kyoka, it has no structural requirements or thematic tendencies; it only needs to be written in five lines. Jane Dougherty reminds us that “each line is a phrase, it can be of any length, even a single word, but the line break comes when there is a breath pause.”
I like the description of rain as knowing only one direction (unlike the sun).
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I like your contrast of the natural stillness of darkness crushed by your own shadows. Beautiful and poignant!
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Crunching darkness with shadows … now that’s a feat!! Great line.
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I love the various emotions in this … very nice.
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kaykuala
Things have been bad, Mary! Yes, we have to make some strong decisions!
Hank
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tantalising emotion tied to weather, and that last line!
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Rain knows only one direction…that line sticks with me. (K)
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