An Impatient Wind

This month is waning almost gone
March winds are nipping at her heels
I see behind me dreams undone
This month is waning almost gone

I hope the pieces bare as stone
Resuscitate a heart to feel
This month is waning almost gone
March winds are nipping at her heels

Dversepoets.com the challenge is as triolet. 8 lines, the first, fourth and seventh repeat. The second and fourth repeat. Rhyme scheme is Abaaabab.

I found it a bit difficult, but fun.

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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16 Responses to An Impatient Wind

  1. Frank Hubeny says:

    I like the idea of the cold March winds pushing February away. Wind does seem impatient when it’s cold and blows faster than a breeze.

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  2. Truedessa says:

    I am ready for March it was cold windy February day here.

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  3. kim881 says:

    I enjoyed you impatiently windy triolet, Mary, especially the image of March winds nipping at February’s heels. I do hope March isn’t too windy over here, we’ve had enough already.

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  4. Raivenne says:

    It is especially windy where I am, today. It really does feel like March is hurrying February out the door. Wonderful triolet.

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  5. Hmm. This doesn’t read as though you found it difficult!

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  6. calmkate says:

    agree, I found it difficult but fun … your’s flows delightfully and has resonated with so many 🙂

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  7. msjadeli says:

    It is a fun form, I agree. You captured the bleakness of this time of year well, Mary.

    Like

  8. And here I come and coming when March is already upon us… Today it feels like March winds have teeth just like last month’s had.

    Like

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