Wonderful Water!

It’s not the peas that take down the swelling
It’s the ice
Frozen stifles what runs too free
Its not the thirst saying I’m alive
It’s the quench of rebirth that revives
Its not the care I carry that releases you
It’s the weight I let go of
So I can rise and help from another plane
Water in three forms
Isn’t it a trinity?
Another reflection of God

dVersepoetspub.com prompt for Tuesday is “Water in its 3 forms, solid, liquid, gas”.


About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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12 Responses to Wonderful Water!

  1. Good morning Mary.
    “Its the quench of rebirth that revives”. Thank you for these hope-filled words dear sister.

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  2. I love the comparison of God and water. So beautiful and hopeful.

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  3. robtkistner says:

    I am sure it could be construed as such by those of that persuasion. Interesting perspective Mary… many elements can be a liquid a solid and a gas depending, like water, on temperature… 🙂

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    • Yes, of course you are correct..water is just one. I find there are many who cannot reconcile the fact of a trinity in God, and I keep seeing his Image all over the place. We are created in His image the bible does say. Yes I am of that persuasion. It makes such perfect sense to me. Enjoy it as a poem, if nothing else. Thank you for your comments.


  4. Frank Hubeny says:

    I like the reference to the trinity and quench of rebirth.

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  5. I like the idea of how letting go of the weight I am carrying will release you.

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  6. That ending! 😍


  7. Glad you like it! Thank you!


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