Hopefully it won’t take a lifetime to learn that who we are is enough and all we have is privilege, undeserved. Until we see, not from within the confines of our own eye, but from a reality apart from this three dimensional world that everyone else is enough too, there will never be resolve. If I was blind I would not see your skin. If I were deaf I would not hear your hate or love or indifference. But this too would not quell, but inflame the senses that remain.
The more I am truly given,
The more I see
That it is all a gift;
If I have not what you have
If I am who you are not
What spurs this emotion
That counts me or you the better?
Hopefully, not a lifetime, for after death it is too late realized.
Thorns on a dead rose will still draw blood
dVersepoetrypub.com prompt is privilege, which to me implies prejudice. It lies within all of us, masked often by another word, preference. I don’t know What kind of poem this is. It is free verse. It just is what I was thinking. Try not to be prejudiced.
conditioned from an early age to sort and assemble differences and similarities but not taught of its significance in life, your words are thought provoking Mary
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A difficult word indeed!
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Your last line packs a punch – those thorns do indeed linger. Attitudes are difficult to change.
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Each one can only change his own. And pray others follow.
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I believe you are right about that.
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“Thorns on a dead rose will still draw blood” — There is much truth to this. But while damage cannot be undone, change for the better is always welcome.
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Oh my yes. Never give up!
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The more I am truly given,
The more I see
That it is all a gift;
I love this. This poem and the message. Thanks again Mary.
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Thank you, and you are welcome!
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Oh yes.. prejudice and privilege goes hand in hand… maybe facing your privileges will lead you to also see your prejudices… I have had to do this a few times and it always takes an effort.
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This word provokes much emotion. The effort is worth it.
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Sometimes it is hard to see, what others are seeing or believing. But I pray for compassion and that gift to see beyond me. You hit a nerve here Mary.
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It is good to wake up these nerves of ours, though painful they may be. To want to be on the other side of it is hope!
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