It Just Takes A Wink

I looked up and saw the light dimming
And the blur of night swimming
Through the rain
One winking star caught my eye
Or did mine catch his…
I winked back
All okay
He seemed to say
So I believed it to be true

It is quadruple Monday at dVersepoetspub.com the prompt word is ‘WINK’. Exactly 44 words excluding the title

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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17 Responses to It Just Takes A Wink

  1. Grace says:

    That winking star can be very assuring.

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  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice line: “One winking star caught my eye” I used to think of stars twinkling, but winking is even better.

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  3. Gina says:

    blur of night swimming was just perfect to me – loved that description

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  4. Sometimes the feeling that someone winks at us is enough to make it trough the night.

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  5. sanaarizvi says:

    Beautifully rendered, Mary! ❤️

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  6. De Jackson says:

    Love that winking star, but especially “blur of night.” Perfection.

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  7. I think that star was assuring you that things will be well.

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  8. Rob Kistner says:

    Hi Mary! I enjoyed reading your poem here, it was well written… star light star bright… 🙂

    …rob from Image & Verse
    My “wink”

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