All in threes
Now poetry
Included in the mix
Like an elix(er)
(One passed today
I only knew her name
I could not grieve as others closer
I knew the one who fixed her)
Body soul Spirit
Me myself and I
All intertwined
Which is it
Liquid, water, gas
One turns to the other
And then another
Touch, taste, see
Planets, moon, stars
All make up a galaxy
(I thought of her sister
I met her once
Through my friend
A trinity so to speak
I knew of one by the two)
We are an isosceles triangle
An enclosed unit
Until another trinity
Entered our dimension
With all intention
Of getting our attention
(I crack the egg into the hot oil
The opaque runs and turn white
The whole is the sum of all its parts
What makes it hard to get it right)
An open heart
A confessing soul
An open plea
To the trinity who will set me free
And answer all my poetry
(Watching that, I grieve for the living
Because I know she is free)
dVersepoetspub.com prompt. Contrapuntal poems are poems that intertwine two or more separate poems into a single composition.
I tried. Hope someone understands it. The parenthesis separates the two poems.
mehflowers 
Nice! The image of the egg is so effective and I really enjoy the mixing of the numbers; the threes in a poem of two.
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Thank you!
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Nice two lines, sound and sense: “To the trinity who will set me free
And answer all my poetry”
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Thanks Frank. This one wasn’t easy for me, but I hate not trying.
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kaykuala
With much restrictions to create the form, and you still managed to maintain the rhyming. Well done Mary!
Hank
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Thanks, eve though I wasn’t sure what I was doing, glad it ended up okay. Learning.
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This reads like a flow of consciousness… one thought melding into another. I think you did very well indeed.
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I agree with Debi’s comment. It does read like a weaving together of threads.
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Thank you! I thought it certainly started as brain “freeze”!
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🙂
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Love how you focus on the trinity here… really good.
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Thank you Bjorn!
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This is beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Love this especially; “To the trinity who will set me free and answer all my poetry.” 💜💛
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Thank you!
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A strong braid indeed. It tells of how souls and God are inextricably bound.
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Thank you so much!
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A braiding and intertwining here…..WordPress doesn’t make it easy to do this prompt! But — I thoroughly enjoyed this and most especially these lines:
“(I thought of her sister
I met her once
Through my friend
A trinity so to speak
I knew of one by the two)
Your weaving of three is consistently done by words, elements, and the word “trinity” itself. And as another said, the egg imagery is quite effective.
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WordPress doesn’t make much easy. Thank you for your encouraging comments. I appreciate the safety net of poets in this group.
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Likening poetry to prayer is apt. With is woven piece, the trinity will sure smile upon you!
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I love that you used opaque as a noun. Stunning poem.
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