Sense(able) Ties

Precious are the friendships carved and seen in rhyme
Syllables we hear in our own perspective time
Fragrance lingers long as each memory rekindles
Scintillating flavors carrying each other to their prime

Offering this to both sites, dVersepoetspub,com and napowrimo. Write a poem in the rubai style. AABA meter. Include images that engage all five senses, inviting the reader to see, touch, hear, taste and smell. I tried.




About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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9 Responses to Sense(able) Ties

  1. rothpoetry says:

    Nice Mary! I like the idea of people being a blend of pleasant flavors enjoyed through out life!

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  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice rubai! I liked this phrase putting time and perspective together: “our own perspective time”

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  3. I really like how you brought out the senses that we feel between us…

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  4. You succeeded in bringing all of the senses into this one!

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  5. kim881 says:

    I enjoyed your rubai, Mary, especially the opening line about precious friendships.

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  6. lillian says:

    Great combination of the two prompts….especially I like the idea of precious friendships.

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  7. Waltermarks says:

    It’s really put together well. It illustrates friendship as touching the senses

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