Precious are the friendships carved and seen in rhyme
Syllables we hear in our own perspective time
Fragrance lingers long as each memory rekindles
Scintillating flavors carrying each other to their prime
Offering this to both sites, dVersepoetspub,com and napowrimo. Write a poem in the rubai style. AABA meter. Include images that engage all five senses, inviting the reader to see, touch, hear, taste and smell. I tried.
Nice Mary! I like the idea of people being a blend of pleasant flavors enjoyed through out life!
Dwight
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Thank you. I value friendship so much.
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Nice rubai! I liked this phrase putting time and perspective together: “our own perspective time”
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Thanks Frank. I always surprise myself when it comes out right
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I really like how you brought out the senses that we feel between us…
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You succeeded in bringing all of the senses into this one!
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I enjoyed your rubai, Mary, especially the opening line about precious friendships.
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Great combination of the two prompts….especially I like the idea of precious friendships.
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It’s really put together well. It illustrates friendship as touching the senses
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