Change

She moves languidly through the days
A listless performance
Like an overly rehearsed play
Empty echoes bouncing
Like holograms you cannot touch
making no impact
Time for a curtain call
A scene change
A new script
Not a sequel
Not a remake
A character change
Leaving the familiar behind

dVerse prompt. Write any poem at all. Open link night!

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About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on medium.com. My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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13 Responses to Change

  1. Seasons that don’t live up to expectations are like everything else that never does. Isn’t it always true the event you believe will be a total bust are the most fun and the ones you wait for with skipping hearts never quite fulfill. Well captured here!

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  2. Jo Aylard says:

    This is a lovely piece – to me it speaks of embracing change.

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  3. Waltermarks says:

    A chrysalis, metamorphosis. She had to shed the cocoon to fly. That’s beautiful

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  4. I love the imagery. Holograms are so evocative of the intangible.

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  5. hypercryptical says:

    Love the imagery too – and yes, sometimes we need to change as the seasons do.
    Anna :o]

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  6. sanaarizvi says:

    Such soulful imagery in this one 💜 change is as essential as breathing I believe 😊

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  7. Vivian Zems says:

    The listlessness and emptiness is reflected strongly in your words. If I were being flippant (like now) – I’d say she needs a good holiday- or happiness.

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  8. The unbearable lightness of being… sometimes I would just embrace any change.

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  9. Frank Hubeny says:

    I like those last two lines leaving the familiar behind with a character change.

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  10. Nan Mykel says:

    Reblogged this on NANMYKEL.COM and commented:
    A breath of fresh air! I’m reblogging.

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  11. Grace says:

    A time for a change, I agree !

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  12. mhmp77 says:

    kaykuala

    Not a remake
    A character change
    Leaving the familiar behind

    This is a totally different thing. Nothing to connect it to the previous ones. Being innovative is not easy. Rightly so Mary!

    Hank

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