Echo the Miracle

They all turned them away
Babe crunched between Ox and lamb
In a manger of hay
But angels voices alive in praise
Not crunched or silenced
By Satan’s gaze
Oh now the veil will soon be torn
His fate is sealed
Christ is born

dVersepoets prompt is a quadrille,  a poem of exactly 44 words , (excluding title). The word to include is any form of “crunch”. In light of the Advent season,  I offer this.

About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. I love Jesus and sharing my faith through written words. I currently have a poetry blog and also write on My main focus is hope in Christ. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused.
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8 Responses to Echo the Miracle

  1. whimsygizmo says:

    This is concise, and beautiful and perfect. The rhyme, the rhythm, your choice of wording – wonderful!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Frank Hubeny says:

    Nice sound in your Christmas poem.


  3. Blessed, indeed. Thank you for bringing home the gift we receive.


  4. jazzytower says:

    In the spirit of the season, nice.


  5. Imelda says:

    Beautiful. 🙂


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