Eve ‘n Me

The dish set before me is tempting
Bright colors bid me to appetite
Each morsel tasted bids me more

Remembering a story where she wanted more
She had all she needed, but, Oh, the tempting
When she heard of it’s promise, how it increased more appetite

Juices of the fruit flavor the appetite
I feel no fullness, but crave even more
And now everything looks tempting

The thirst for more is only tempting as appetites go uncontrolled

 

–Today’s prompt…A tritina. 3 3-line stanzas and a final concluding line. ABC, CAB, BCA sequence

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About Mary (tqhousecat)

I am a wife and a mother of two grown children. Recently I have begun writing a couple of blogs. One poetry and one on hope. I only wish that whoever reads this will be blessed, inspired and occasionally amused. Soon to be added is another blog...writings on hope from a biblical perspective. Now it can be seen at purplepandasandotherphenomena.blogspot.com. please feel free to visit.
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2 Responses to Eve ‘n Me

  1. I love alliteration. Great poem. Thank you for sharing. #aprilisnationalpoetrymonth

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  2. Thank you for reading them! Some are a real challenge.

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